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sporkofdoom 2006-11-17 . chapter 1
This rhymes really well, but it was way too angst-ridden. Way, way too angst ridden. My head hurts.
The flow is beautiful though.
Dragonzz 2006-11-13 . chapter 1
I really like this. Especially

"I would like to say I meant something more
But I know I didn’t, I know I didn’t
I wish I did, but I don’t and I didn’t before
And it’s all been written, it’s all been written"

Really liked that part.
Great job

~dragonzz~
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