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Reviews For: Night's Desire

Vira Fern 2007-03-10 ch 3, anon.	abuseI love you're character's voice. This was a great chapter, only I wish more would have happened. Don't be afraid to make your chapters longer. __ Vira
Emmie1000 2006-12-06 ch 2,	abuseWOW! Another Night's Desire and another Elemental guardian and more, I'm impressed by your writing abilitites :). Now keep up the good work. I WANT MORE CHAPTERS!
Vira Fern 2006-11-26 ch 2, anon.	abuseIt's uber late here.^^ I'm still reviewing anyways. Oh! I feel so special, you know that? I'm a supportive influence! I love it how you can make just a few words sound so... perfect. I use way too much discription in my writing. I like the simplicity if only because it's two in the morning and I just got back from a cast-party where I ate a lot of other people's food. Yeah, I'm so cool right now... I'm babbling. Really really badly. Okay, back to the story. I'm starting to think that the title is about this whole concert where all of a sudden Eli's just like "omg... Charlie's a lot hotter and cooler than Neesie. Let's kiss him..." Except he'll have a more complicated, reasonable explaination for that instead of my over-tired one. I'm gonna go away now... -- Vira
Vira Fern 2006-11-14 ch 1,	abuse-grin- I like it! I'm eager to see where this is going, and I love the way you were so true about lexi. People who look like that are fake... -- Vira
Emmie1000 2006-11-12 ch 1,	abuseNow now I rather like this. You're so talented. You've got me hooked after just one chapter and a short one at that. I absolutely can't wait to see another chapter, mind you I hope this doesn't stop you from writing Elemental Guardian chapters. Good to see you are still writing though. See you Love Emm!e10

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