quite interesting, such good analogies, over all quite amusing

Nice. I've been that way. Or I've come up with something in the middle of the night and been either too asleep to pull myself out of bed or I can't find pen and paper in the dark. Oh, and I love the poem.

such a funny little ditty, well done,

To see a poet without a pen is a sad sight indeed. But you do have a gift and I know that your pen will come back to you. *gives him a virtual pen and a hug* Your analogies are always so amazing.

EB

Very nice. I find that I have a very hard time writing with a pen, actually. Or a pencil. I'm so conditioned to typing and backspacing. Anyway, I like your comparisons at the end, and you have some good alliteration. Just a good poem over all.