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| Rovandin 2007-02-07 ch 1,  | abuseKewl. I like the super sonic speakers line alot. |
| boys kiss girls 2006-11-15 ch 1, | abuseI love this, it reminds me of some sort of club over in france or something. Fantastical, buddy. I love with the imagry and how it's fast paced. |
| ode to a firefly 2006-11-13 ch 1, | abuseReminds me of that night when your aunt asked us if we were going to go clubbing, and we were like "Uh...there are *clubs* in Boise?" =P This flows really well, and I like the random rhyming. ♥Christine |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2006-11-12 ch 1, | abuseYou've done a really nice job of creating a club scene with this poem. I like that. And how the heck did you make that music note? It's cute and I want to put one in my profile! (I really like those little hearts, too, so if you know how to make those...) Anyway, yes, very nice poem, kinda makes me want to go clubbing! Keep writing! :) |
| Aquafied 2006-11-12 ch 1, | abusespinning and lights woo |