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| Twilight Starr 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseCute poem. ^^ ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Banshee Junior 2007-01-06 ch 1, | abuseI love this! I love the rhythm, the way you talk about what everybody does what you can't do, and how you envy it. I can identify with this completely. I love the description of the objects you own which you compare with what everyone else has, the emptiness inherent, as well as the hope in the last stanza. |
| peewee potato 2006-11-18 ch 1, | abusethey've all got their love to keep them warm/i've got a sweater i don't want to put on My favourite line. All I can say is that this is a gorgeous piece and it's just so smooth that I envy you. Have a wonderful day, S.B. |