Cute poem. ^^

~Twilight Starr~

I love this! I love the rhythm, the way you talk about what everybody does what you can't do, and how you envy it. I can identify with this completely. I love the description of the objects you own which you compare with what everyone else has, the emptiness inherent, as well as the hope in the last stanza.

they've all got their love to keep them warm/i've got a sweater i don't want to put on

My favourite line. All I can say is that this is a gorgeous piece and it's just so smooth that I envy you.

Have a wonderful day,
S.B.