I didnt like how some lines were so short, but i liked the alliteraion in the third line and the ending

WOW... this gave me chills... "time for me to tell him he can touch me... maybe should wait, hasn't even said I like you". I got chills from this cuz it's scary how much the person in the poem is willing to give themselves away, how much they want to give to this other person when they haven't even said they like each other yet. So so well written. =)