That was, honestly, beautiful. Beautiful writing, first off, beautiful imagery, and beautiful, haunting story entirely. I loved it and I would love to read more about these characters. Thank you so much for writing such a lovely and well-made story. ^^

>_< wow...sad...but hey, its a memorable story =) I'm pretty sure, i'll be thinking/remembering it trommow in class(es)

wow

Wow, this left me rather speechless. Good job!

So beautiful.

the thing that i love about your work is that you manage to fit angst in without it being too overbearing, and yet it is necessary all in itself.

i just love it.

Aw, that was sweet. :)

The sadness that is reality. Well written.

I like it.