The rythym in this is really nice. My favorite line is "apathy's never lonely."

Amazing, I love how the last line ends this piece. Beautifully written, keep it up.

Your summary got me hooked - and wow, this was really a great read! Kudos to you!

Some really brilliant one liners here. This review is pretty lame, because it's one in the morning, but basically? I dig it.