i have never read a love poem--or a love/hate poem--written from a third-person perspective before. its highly interesting. "Puppy-eyed whispersoft 'sorrys'" is wonderful. wonderful. i know exactly what those are and what they look like. its sad and angry and personal, tangibly so, just like a love/hate poem should be. great job. ::)

love, c.induced.

Oh, sad. You have some interesting phrases in this, like "Puppy-eyed whispersoft 'sorrys'" and "when she wasn't shredding the abused hope from her skin." A tragic and angsty poem. Keep writing! :)