 so i sing to the stars 2008-01-31 . chapter 1Wow. What an ending. I'm not sure I would have resorted to those same measures, but then again, I have yet to be in that situation.
However, there was one technicality that threw me off: would someone *really* die after one bottle of vodka? Just a question, seeing as I have very minimal alcohol knowledge. xP
"They will soon." - "They *would* soon." I'm pretty sure.
Other than those minor issues, this was nicely written. :^) |
 braindead1345 2006-11-20 . chapter 1The thing some people will do...corse, if it was me, Id proably whated to die too, but I dont have the guts... I love the way you wrote this, a frist i though she was a little emo kid and was going to cut herself, but nope! I love who you didnt tell the reason until the end..but whyd she agree to the date if she knew she was going to kill herself? Anwsers, please. |