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Taltush/MeiMei 2006-11-13 . chapter 1
It's a strange kind of poem, not very clear, but very pretty. These are good descriptions giving an interesting story. Kind of short, but not bad.

Correction: "Show them your tough side." Not "you're tough side". Not you are tough side... right? Is it just a typo? Your?
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