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| Na'rmer 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseSublime; it's not 'words falling from one's mouth', it's just the way I felt when I've finished this tragic, yet beautiful description. The title is great, the subject is a little bit old, but good, once you figure out a way to resurrect it :), your description is great (already mentioned)... what can I say more? I like it. It flows beautifully, in all its dark, melancholic glory! |
| Nocturnal silhouette 2007-04-22 ch 1, | abuseOh my goodness. This was absolutely gorgeous. Wonderfully written. The emotions are very real, and I love the metaphor of the leaf. Brilliantly written. |
| Ravena Wolf 2006-11-15 ch 1, | abuseyou have a spell mistake: was digging threw the should be: was digging through the this:storms and cold and gray. sounds better this way: storms of cold and grey. you have many miss spellings and misusuals of the word threw and through, but other than that I really liked this, what is the is though, is it a poem or is it a story that will go on? -Raven *merry meet, merry part, bright the cheeks, warm the heart* |
| Da Vinci at Work 2006-11-14 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully enchanting. Is there a chance that you will turn this into a story? :D |