this is it the fialen battle!

it sucked. not in the way it was written but the paragraphs were to long so i did not bother reading all the chs

for a moment i was worred for you but thank god it was just Edward.what's going to happen when Mingan's brother finds out about this he won't be to happy now will he?.can't wait to find out what is going to happen next in this story.keep it up your doing great!

so Greypaw has a mate? wow! this sure it geting good Master

so once again we stuck and with Aubrey mad about his brothers death who knows what he will do. and who is Tala seems we might find out more on her in the next chapter or two and could it be that there might be something between me and Hyde? find out next time.

who is 'Him'? but he is not a good guy right Master? and great job keep going!

so we are one step closer to finding Moon with Mingan down and with his brother who is going to be hot on are trail.We are going to have to hurry it up.

poor Silver i'll hope he'll be alright. won't he? glad you got out of there.now ya just have to find Moon and Henry.

so guys what do you think so far hm?
chapter 17 & 18 come soon so ya keep comeing by to check ok?

can't wait to see what happens next to you and eveyone else.
it should be geat to see what happens. please update!PLEASE!!

thanks for all the great reviews guys ya made me day! and i'll thinl about the 2nd dragons story drake if you mind? i'll use your idea.

oh Boy is this geting good,can't wait to see how it goes. What is going to happen to them? hope Jack won't do anything to them.

it has gone great so far keep up the great work mate can't wait to see how it will end!oh and i love the charter of Moon and the two other dog brothers. Keep it up like i said!