This flowed so well that I didn't even notice that it rhymed until the end! It's so simple, but I think that's what gives this poem its charm. I liked it. :)
-Cristina

This is beautiful. I love the wording used!

Thanks for the review!

Rowan.

I loved the poem, and the personification of Autumn. I really like the message as well. Grow up, but stay young at heart, that's my motto and you portray it beautifully. The only complaint I would have is sometimes the flow is a little awkward, nothing to worry about though since most writers hav ethis difficulty (including me)

Keep up the good work!

Wow, that's really good! You did a good job describing the emotion and focusing on it. Thanks for reviewing on my poem!

I can really hear the melancholy in the speaker's voice. The images are so wistfully clear, memory serving to sharpen the immense emotion present in this poem. I like it. And then, of course, you add a little hope at the end there, bringing it full circle. There was, however, one line that bugged me: "and could appreciate your for just one day." I think you meant "appreciate you for" but I'm not sure. It just doesn't make sense gramatically. But regardless, this is a very 'feeling' poem, which is nice. Keep up the good work!

That was great! I love how you personified it to make it seem as though it was something much more than just a season of the year. Excellent expressions and wording used, too.

Nice...I like the wording.^^