i love how the emotion just oozes out of this one
its great and keep it up

Nice emotion to it. I like the breaks and the descriptions of the abandoned city. It takes a lot to illustrate emotions, especially in a methaphoric sense. Good poem!

Wow, the ending just ties everything together! AWESOME poem. Really, really good! I liked the bit on "abandoned city".

Good job!

I love the idea and the emotion that flows out of this piece.
~Rowan~