not bad. not bad at all. ive defentally been in that sitch before. only mine was very, weight of the world. keep it up. :D

I really liked the phrase "These walls are closing in and they're coming in fast."

It was really dramatic and imagery was great. (Indiana Jones! JK lol)

And the last line, "It's all on me."

Good job. Something I can relate too.

Wonderful poem. The title is really eye-drawing.

Guilt. Something that haunts many of us. Excellent job.
~Rowan~