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half-sketched.staccatos 2007-02-05 . chapter 1
konban wa

I almost cried for this poem - seriously. The saddest part was:

"I still wake up screaming?
Because I can't stop dreaming
About my little sister,
Who I would die for,
Dying in my arms"

OMG, that's just so sad. Have you ever had something that you just can't explain how you feel about it. The only way I'd be able to express how that makes me feel is to cry, but you wouldn't see that. It just makes my heart ACHE ... I don't know how to explain that. Just know that it was really moving, and it was just amazing.

Gute nacht
-Shan-
Torn Silver Moon 2006-12-14 . chapter 1
Great job on this, Bec. I really like this one, I think it's your best work. I even remember you showing me your rough draft in history and loving it. Great job, keep at it!
Red Panda Bear 2006-11-18 . chapter 1
Great job! School stinks.
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