Believe it or not, I have actually felt like this a week ago. I wanted to do his works...but I felt something holding me back. I prayed long and hard about it and now I am starting to think better and plan to do what I originally wanted to do.

Your word choices were beautiful and how they flowed together. Also, I agree with the other girl who reviewed before, this does kind of sound like "The Road Less Taken" poem (or whatever the title is ^_^).

Thanks for telling us your screen name. I am glad you did.

That was cute. I liked that a lot. A poem can be any thing that you want it to be. Read the peoms that I write. They don't sound all that great either, but to me they are perfect. And so are your peoms to you. Keep up the great work! I can't wait to read more! Write you later! ;)

great job!
beautifully done, I loved the line
"to grab a sword like a warrior"

This immediately reminded me of "Two Roads Diverged in A Yellow Wood" by Robert Frost... "And I, I took the road less taken..."... it's almost like your own personal rendition of a classic. That's not a bad thing. It was very unique too. Anyway, what I'm attempting to say is that this is great poetry at work... reminding me of a famous poet.