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Zero-Sum
2007-05-14
ch 1,
abusean interesting concept, but what's the point of the story? what should i be taking from it as inspirational? plus some oddly structured sentences...
Royal Bliss
2006-11-13
ch 1,
abusePretty interesting. There were a few odd sounding sentences but you could probably catch some maybe if you read over it. Unless it was intentional I'm not too sure.
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