|Reviews for Jeremy|
| Next Exit 5/14/07 . chapter 1
an interesting concept, but what's the point of the story? what should i be taking from it as inspirational? plus some oddly structured sentences...
| Royal Bliss 11/13/06 . chapter 1
Pretty interesting. There were a few odd sounding sentences but you could probably catch some maybe if you read over it. Unless it was intentional I'm not too sure.