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| Zero-Sum 2007-05-14 ch 1,  | abusean interesting concept, but what's the point of the story? what should i be taking from it as inspirational? plus some oddly structured sentences... |
| Royal Bliss 2006-11-13 ch 1, | abusePretty interesting. There were a few odd sounding sentences but you could probably catch some maybe if you read over it. Unless it was intentional I'm not too sure. |