"A silent packed between friends"
I think you mean pact, not packed.
Theres a few other spelling mistakes, you might want to run through and spell check it some time.

Really good though. Theres something about, as though you could use a cliche saying here but you use something original instead kind of feel. I cant explain it, but its really good.

I'm sure this was personal poem so that always adds a deeper touch to it. New style I see but as always a wonderful poem. As always I leave the critque to others and I wish you well.

-A Broken Record