*Eyes sparkles* An artist?! Wonderful!
You hadn't updated in MONTHS!
Yet when I saw this, I was upset! You should update it!

It's really good, good enough to be a real book!

Ooh this is interesting!

Hey! I love the start of this. The exchange between Adrienne and the blond guy was very intriguing...I would love to see how he plays into the story later.
Anyway, great first chapter, even if it's a bit short. Also, I suggest a line break in between Adrienne's discovery of the body and the flashback to before it happened. I got really confused without any sort of break and had to re-read it a few times before I realized what was going on. No big, though, there weren't any other problems and that's a good thing.
I am hooked. Update soon, I really want to see what happens. You've got some great characters and a great beginning, so keep it up!
J.S.