Huzzah!! Hagler has a story!! YAY!!it has Zombies in it!! we make those weapons for a reason i see. MUWAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAhahahahahaha!! you write very well. i like how you portrayed with Kim Jong. YA! only the first chapter and i was almost killed already! i feel special now.
author person/shaggywolf

Such a tranquil start, and then it gets much more... dark.

I can't wait to see more of this "Kiki" person you mentioned.

My hair is straight! Not wavy. And why do all you people say I am attractive. Lies! All lies!

Still, I can't wait until the next chapter! Write! Update! Please!

Is this supposed to be what Kim Jong Il would've been like if it was in the future? A very original concept indeed. I like the way you tell us briefly but descriptively who Kim Jong is without giving too much away, and at the same time surrounding him with mystery. Nuclear weapons...I'm looking forward to those.

Very good start! Sounds like my dad's book, lol. I am interested to see how this will tie in with zombies... update plz!!

Interesting writing style. It is a bit short. I would like to see the rest of the story when it is written. Remember, kill me off in it.