Yeah, it's kind of hard letting go of people when they haunt your dreams - especially if you're a huge dreamer like me. I like this poem; it's something I'd write about, but in a different style. I've definitely been in this situation more than once. This is brilliantly done, Vix.

P.S. Thanks so much for mentioning me in your profile! It means heaps that you think of me as a friend. Anyhoo, thank you so much.

I like the ending. my dreams always haunt me and thus I make poetry out of them. but then there's the happy ones when you actually dream about someone you love...

awesome work! you did great!

Beautiful poem! I really loved it. The last stanza was brilliant and the last line worked so well.
Thank you for your reviews. Sorry for not reviewing much myself recently but real life keeps getting in the way!
Great work, keep it up!
x QueenVixta x