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Vulpes Vulpes 2006-11-17 . chapter 1
I don't want to repeat myself again (well, I already have :-D) because I know I must sound annoying, but I've got to say once more that this is truly exceptional! How can you write so many beautiful poems? Seriously, you would rival all the really brilliant writers in your username; that's how good you are, and I'm not just saying it! You honestly should be published.

There is a certain indescribable energy about each of them, something that's not far removed from faeries and magic and the beauty of the world itself, but that is, at the same time, totally unique from that, and totally of itself, and that makes it even more special.

I love, 'That is, till the summer's new dairy cools' and 'Unbeknownst to me, of course/Was the magick dolphin measured', but it seems unfair to choose particular lines when the entire piece is brilliance itself.
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