Aww, so clever and adorable! I love the tension and the meanings behind the descriptions. Great work.

LXF

Very interesting and differetn, but i liked it all the same. Great ending. I'm jealous of your endings! (not that that doesnt sound weird...) they're always very good. Great job, keep writing.

yikes, very insightful. I'm glad that the person in this poem got up the courage to walk away. Very powerful but almost painful in it's intensity.

Hey Hun! Good to see you posting again! This was a really good piece - nice style and flow to it. I'm not sure I understand why she walked away in the end, but I love this just the same! _

Hey, I loved this! I was wondering if you would start writing again. I love how you put in the undertones, what everyone was thing and what they were doing. Beautifully done.

Keep it up.

hii...thats a fab poem...i really liked it!

I liked this. The ending was great! - This is a really nice piece of work. Keep up the great work!

More of a prose than poetry but very good, easy to read; with a nice athosphere.

Beautiful poem you have here Alex! I love the titel and the second stanza the best _ And how're you doing babe? Haven't talked to you in a while. Is everything okay?

Much love, Rosanna.