 AgamiMuffin 2008-12-23 . chapter 8Heh, I loved this |
 OctoberAvenue 2008-10-08 . chapter 8These are such cute compilations. My favorite one would have to be the last one with Casper and Teresa. I really enjoy reading about the Family Ties stories as it is interesting that they are all interconnected. All of the stories were so sweet. I loved it. You are an amazing writer as I still haven't found a story that you've written and I didn't like. And let me tell you, I am a picker reader! Amazing job, I look forward to reading more! |
 kaitlintaylor 2008-09-30 . chapter 2This is really cool :) I like it. |
 grammar and whatnot =D 2008-09-06 . chapter 8 Hi there!
I've noticed that you have some grammar mistakes that I thought wouldn't hurt to fix up.
The main one is : they're, their, and there. Now I'll distinguish them for you
'their' is possessive, it's used to express something as a possession of someone else. As in: They went on their honeymoon. It is their ball.
'they're' is the contraction of 'they are'. Example sentences: They're going to be coming soon. They're not always like that.
It seems you keep using 'their' in place of 'they are'.
'there' is used when pointing to a place, direction etc. Example sentences: go over there. It's found there. There it went!
I hope this helps!
And I love this by the way! The short stories, great idea and very sweet and suitable! |
 Huh? 2008-08-24 . chapter 1 You wrote: "Casper, my second oldest brother, recently returned from living in Hades for two years where he was doing missionary work for our church." Did you mean Haiti? Because Hades is the equivalent of hell in Greek mythology; presumably he had a pretty low conversion rate there. |
 TragicSyn 2008-08-21 . chapter 4I really love your story. Especially how you put the quotes in, and make them work with the story...i think that's the best part. You really are a great writer. |
 veautiful 2008-08-21 . chapter 8i love you're story :) love the shields hehe love all of them! are you still planning on continuing this? i'm assuming that the next story will be about chamomile & her husband. i would love to have a continuation about the shields :) especially clove... and chelsey... and casper... i want all of them! and let us not forget pope & mary hehe and i must say, their names are really ironic with their characters haha |
 xhianglian 2008-08-08 . chapter 1omg that family image being superficial at the start of this story reminded me of my own family to the T! its enough to drive someone insane! |
 Isabella Fluduano 2008-07-30 . chapter 5I love this story so far! It is incredible! |
 Kjersti 2008-06-30 . chapter 8 Great story. I loved it, as always. :) |
 Oooh.Look.A Cat 2008-06-19 . chapter 8you weren't kidding when you said it wasn't in order
it took me a few minutes to figure out what you meant
thats a bit sad
on another note
i love the second part of family ties
absolutely awesome
and what's better, they don't automatically get back together
it makes it seem more real haha
can't wiat for more...
if there is more...
which there hopefully is
izzie |
 AlexisLovesYou 2008-06-18 . chapter 8I love your stories. |
 Candyfloss Victim 2008-06-18 . chapter 4i've just come across these stories and i think that they're fan-spacking-tacular! will read more soon, when i get the chance! x |
 Oyuki 2008-06-17 . chapter 8i didn't think theresa would be gone for so long. she was stubborn. awesome story(ies). |
 The Professionals 2008-05-20 . chapter 7I love your series! Even the bad girls get their own happily ever after! :D |