 Murphy's Lawyer 2006-11-14 . chapter 1Aw well you know how much I loved Adrian Vira, you didn't have to ask me to read and review. I would have read it anyways, but as soon as I saw the words 'companion to Adrian' I was stuck on it.
I'm guessing it's told from Adrian's point of view up in heaven, eh? That's so sad... I'm also guessing it's not going any further than this. But still, it's good. It's sad though. Almost make me cry, your stories do.
Okay I won't lie, I DID have tears in my eyes at the end of Adrian. Only reason I wasn't bawling was because my little brothers - who were in the room at the time - never would have let me live it down.
As always, it's great, Vira. Glad you wrote it.
- Lauren |
 An-Author-At-Heart 2006-11-14 . chapter 1Beautiful! The emotions were lovely, the descriptions well done. It was very nicely written, I liked it. Was the poem yours? If so it's lovely, and if not, well, it would have been nice if you had written where it's from. Good job! |