I like the idea, but some parts do not flow well. Very good, though. :-)

hey its me again
nice intro 2 the character, i can kinda realate 2 her wiv the hole bein different thing coz im 6ft 4 wen all of ma m8s r only 5 n a half feet tall... o well at least i get 2 take the mik evry now n agen
well keep updatin lovin the story so far
c ya

hey this is a great set up 4 an even better story! it sounds kind of like the book eragon by christopher paolini but that was a great book and bet this will be too! keep ritin!