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| Xerophyte 2006-11-16 ch 1,  | abuseThis is lovely. I like the theme, and what's sad is how true it is. Love can really suck sometimes. I love the ending. It's the ever-popular harmful love that you just can't get rid of. Beautiful work. I love the simplicity of it. One thing, because I'm a grammar fiend. You left out apostrophes in...well, every contraction. Yes, this is nitpicky. I'm sorry I'm such a grammar dictator... Thanks for your review. It was the first rhyming poem I've written in about 4 years, so it was kind of weird. Oh, and I'll always review back :) -Xero |