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Reviews For: A Demon's Touch
Custos Morum 2006-12-09 . chapter 1
Hii! Guess who this is ^^

I really liked reading this... there's a lot of vivid imagery and detail, very mood-setting... it feels dark and fantasy-like with a touch of creepy gothyness (mostly attributed to that beast. That beast is SCARY. Job well done [on being able to make me freaked out by it! It's the mark of a good writer when they can make the audience feel, right?]).

Favourite line: "Sometimes two strangers were to share one [taxi], their destination being the only thing in common between them..." I liked this line, liked the part about their destination being all that is common between them... it's a little observation, a little detail thrown in, but it stood out to me. I think because it's something you wouldn't notice at first when you get into a taxi with a stranger. Or maybe I'm just an inobservant dope haha.

Bye ^^

P.S. I'm the girl who needs a scarf =P
Tryphosa Constance 2006-11-30 . chapter 1
L'hommnigosh!!

I love it!

Goodness gracious!

Good thing you forced me to read it, I love it!
arirang 2006-11-14 . chapter 1
Gwen sounds so cool!
The first chapter is very suspenseful...I can't wait to find out more about Gwen and the animal! Update soon ^^
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