 Custos Morum 2006-12-09 . chapter 1Hii! Guess who this is ^^
I really liked reading this... there's a lot of vivid imagery and detail, very mood-setting... it feels dark and fantasy-like with a touch of creepy gothyness (mostly attributed to that beast. That beast is SCARY. Job well done [on being able to make me freaked out by it! It's the mark of a good writer when they can make the audience feel, right?]).
Favourite line: "Sometimes two strangers were to share one [taxi], their destination being the only thing in common between them..." I liked this line, liked the part about their destination being all that is common between them... it's a little observation, a little detail thrown in, but it stood out to me. I think because it's something you wouldn't notice at first when you get into a taxi with a stranger. Or maybe I'm just an inobservant dope haha.
Bye ^^
P.S. I'm the girl who needs a scarf =P |