I absolutely loved this story. For some reason I could picture every scene and had a vision of every character. it just jumped out of the screen for me. It reminded me of Fate Stay/Night but was a thousand times better. Absolutely perfect. It would be kind of cool to have another story with the characters. Maybe someone hijacked the powers of the deck and the characters all gain back the memories of what happen and now have to go and save Lily? *Shrug* I just don't want the story to end. Good stuff.

Excellent. Truly worth the read. It did get a bit confusing at times because of the number of characters that appeared on the story, but otherwise (for me, anyway) it was near perfect. I am also a sucker for happy ending, so I liked the ending.

That was freakin' amazing! I'm glad I didn't throw my Kamikaze Penguins at you so they could enjoy this, too. Lovely story, love...*snickers* Anyway, hope you write more like it!
~Lady Allaria~

Alright, I must truly apologize that I didn't bother to review your 35 chapters but I'm somewhat lazy to log in. I read through your story and I'm quite pleased that you update fast.

I really enjoyed your story as it reminds somewhat of cardcaptors meshed fate/stay night.

You have good abilites as a writer and I'm hoping to read more of your fiction. Overall, good work. If you want look out for my story coming soon (Though I doubt I will have enough time for it to actully place it here.)

Anyway, Till then.
-Yuan Atlasia

Wonderful! Sorry I didn't review before this. I have no excuse for that. I really enjoyed the story, and I do hope you write a sequel (or prequel), because that would be so cool! I LOVED Lilith - she was so cocky at times, and Maki was just too cute!

- Insanity Lord.

I just Can't help the way I am!

Anyway the story was spectacular, truly enjoyed every minute of it! I'm a huge Evangelion fan, so the ending was outstanding to me. (but enough about me!)

As to the story feeling rushed I say no, things happen more quickly when tension is mounting. And this is fantasy, so the excluding of things like the police investagating the strange goings on at the school, is okay in my opinion. If people are looking for those type of things they shouldn't be clicking the the Fantasy & Manga category. Also I say that would take away time from the main plot of the story!

And Yes! There was lots of action!

As far as favorite characters go I liked Art & Kirose (don't ask why)

As to adding anything to the story, I personally feel the there should have been a bigger showdown with the Dreameater. It taking a little of a beating from the characters!

Maybe Molly enraged at it attacking Art, or Art gets frustrated with it hunting down his him and friends so unmercifully. Sick of the situation going on around him in the final hours of the game he unleashes some of his anger,sadness,rage,and frustration upon the Dreameater. His blood pumped up, he is temporary able to go one on one with it, and hold his own!

I really like the idea of the sequel!!

A great Read (from the crazy fan)!

Wow! very dramatic indeed. Lily and Louis acted just like all divine or magically superior beings act, like true **! No concern at all for us mortals.(atleast that's how it felt to me)

i eagerly await the last chapter!

How i hate cliffhangers!! the end is so near, to bad, so sad!

Sad, truly sad! You aren't pulling any punches are you. All for a single wish, huh!! I wonder in the end is somone going to wish that all the bad things that happened during the game never happened, or for everything to go back to being back to the good times like when everybody was happy like at Isis' birthday party or Kirose's party ,everybody happy and together!! Or is it going to have a sad ending? Who knows? The losses keep coming, and you keep writing, wonderful chapter as always!

( Not that I know you, or that i'm trying to be an **, sadly i'am one though. Sorry i just can't help it, i'm trying to stop(really!). But as i get back to the point, looking at your writing style and other stories. I say the ending will have a happy or semi happy ending, you also don't leave loose end!! )

A High Grade Author, An Outstanding Story, what could people possibly want more!

Hey i used new and bigger words, about time i say!

Man, all I can say is the Dreameater kicks **!

Damn I hate cliffhangers! So it's coming to an end. Secrets reveiled, final battles to be fought, and the of couse the finale. Virage you haven't disappointed us, and I know you won't! For a loyal reader I hate to see this series come to an end! ( sob )

A new chapter, and a great read!! No suggestions the story is progressing beautifully! Poor Hayate, he never stood a chance. I believe now it's everybody for themselves!

Excellent story! Just fantabulous, hun! Anyway, I've pretty muchgot a solid chunk of your plotline figured out, about Lily, Louis, and Paul and all them. I just LOVE Isis! She's so cute! Maki's adorable, too! Lillith just plain scares me. Way too touchy feely for my taste, but an excellent addition to the story. I'm just wondering why Vitz has no personality. Anyway, please update more! I'm a rather violent reviewer, but I'm not going to threaten you...yet. *grins as she moves to shut the curtain that hides her 'toys'*

Finally the friendships that were made are braking apart, Can't wait for all the turmoil and chaos!

Wow, this is a fantastic story...

I love the fore-shadowing done so far :)

May I ask two things? Is it only summons like Lilith and Jezebel that absorb gates, and what's the deal with Paul, Louis and Lily?