 erudite-monk 2006-11-26 . chapter 1If there were grammatical errors, I sure didn't spot them!
'Twas a wonderful story - appropriately-paced and heartfelt. It was a story for readers to relate to, rather than to impress (although I was impressed with its simplicity and affective quality). I have a feeling this will stay in my mind's eye for quite sometime.
Great job, as always! :) |