Wow!

I can't believe I haven't reviewed this yet! This is beautiful! Of course, ALL your work is beautiful. While I read it, different pictures came into my mind. And I could feel the emotion of it! Very well done! :D

I love it! Ha ur great! all my fictions, i wrote one word and they went kapow! lol. i mean like bye bye.

emotions and thoughts are described well in the story, nice plot line

Usually, I don't write so many rewiews at the same author, but I got addicted when I read the first two poems at the top...
I Loved this one, all dramatic and sad and broody.

hey that is pretty good and was very weel put together.

Wow... that's really sad... and so DEEP!
It's sad how they died and he went to hell... because he killed his Dad, who was a VERY bad father, and she's in Heaven and they're separated.
Very well written! I love it!
I'll probably go check out some of your other stories too =]
-Teresa

i love this!!

Holy shizz!! I love this one!! How can you come up with such awesome writing?! ghaa!! I don't know what else to say besides I LOVE IT!

InsanePhoenix,
Keep it up,that's nice...:)


Yours forever in Death's cold pallor,
x/o Yami