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| outsidersgirl 2007-09-24 ch 12,  | abusethis is good |
| outsidersgirl 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abusethis is good |
| nonaanon 2007-01-26 ch 2, anon. | abuseI kind of like this story but there are too many errors for me to love it. I'm not trying to be mean but you need to work on your writing skills. You often use punctuation marks incorrectly, for example, 'Why do you hate me?.' Since this is a question you don't need the period. In the sentence where Titiana is talking about putting up walls during confrontations with her boss you use no instead of know, which is the correct usage. These small mistakes, along with some necessary dropped words, make it hard for me to understand what you are talking about. To me some of your sentences are awkward and gauche because of this. Again I'm not trying to slam you, I'm just giving tips that might make your story more enjoyable. Keep writing! |
| Countessrim 2007-01-21 ch 12, | abuseYAY! It took you like for ever to update! I'm just as excited to go to Aspen as they are! YAY! PS. The pics really help with visualizing! |
| alitalia 2007-01-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseya know, i'm sure you didn't mean to sound racist in your summary by calling it an interracial story, but seriously--why would you write that? it makes no difference at all who you feel/act romantically towards, until you make a big deal out of it... sorry...i didnt read the story, and i'm sure it's good, but just think about what i said grazie :D |
| mrskelley 2007-01-04 ch 11, | abuseGreat Update! |
| Countessrim 2007-01-01 ch 11, | abuseYes, this is going to be great, I can't wait for Aspen! |
| Countessrim 2006-12-29 ch 9, | abuseYes! Another great chapter! I especially like the line " I feel dirty" Update soon plz I love it! |
| mrskelley 2006-12-26 ch 8, | abuseThis is a good story...seems like David Martin still loved his ex. |
| soulmateyez 2006-12-24 ch 4, | abusehavent quite fallen in love with green room yet but its getting there...keep up the good work. i wanna kno more about cj. |
| MarkedbyMelinda 2006-12-22 ch 8, anon. | abuseI loved it! But I hate the common excuse: "It just happened" If it was me, I'd be like "Well,It just happens that I'm about to kick your butt" So anyway, keep going! :) |
| bluegurl12 2006-12-18 ch 7, anon. | abuseThat was good. Please Update SOON! |
| cleo14 2006-12-13 ch 6, anon. | abuseI really like this story and its characters. I hope you continue with it because I really want to find out what happens next. Later |
| debrown700 2006-12-10 ch 6, | abuseOk, this is my first ever review :). I just wanted to say that I'm enjoying the story. Tati needs to tell Mike off and give that Samantha a piece of her mind to. I'm liking Raina...a friend till the end. And CJ, boy just let him take Mike on one more time. I'd like to see CJ get beat him down, lol. I like CJ, he and Raina are my favorite in the story so far. And what's up with Mr. Number 24...is James interested in Raina or what? Ugh, I can't wait till the next update. And Can I say that I wouldn't mind if the Tati and CJ rumor became offical (wink, wink) lol. |
| Alwayzcute 2006-12-08 ch 6, anon. | abuse“ Mike's-” Raina looked at Samantha like she was trash “ lady friend disrespected Mr. Smith. I told told her to shut up.” Raina smiled. My favorite line! I love the way it's written, sounds like something me and my girlies would do! |