Interesting - this one seems to touch on a lot of subjects but has a common theme. I guess the repetition will provide for that last bit. :) It could be a song I guess! I've taken to writing songs of late, so I see a lot of poetry that way now. :)

Wow - I've really missed your poetry. The last four stanzas are my favorite. You're right, it's not angsty. Actually, it tastes sort of bitter-sweet to me. ;)

Very rhythmic, almost like...a breeze...zephyr...i dunno. i really liked it! now, you go READ SHE HAS FALLEN ALREADY! i kid, i kid. but seriously *note serous face* heehee

I love it. So much depth and emotion behind it. I love how you worded it. Awesome.