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| Stormer 2007-04-08 ch 1, | abuseInteresting - this one seems to touch on a lot of subjects but has a common theme. I guess the repetition will provide for that last bit. :) It could be a song I guess! I've taken to writing songs of late, so I see a lot of poetry that way now. :) |
| CerriC 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abuseWow - I've really missed your poetry. The last four stanzas are my favorite. You're right, it's not angsty. Actually, it tastes sort of bitter-sweet to me. ;) |
| Niki Lemonade 2006-11-25 ch 1, | abuseVery rhythmic, almost like...a breeze...zephyr...i dunno. i really liked it! now, you go READ SHE HAS FALLEN ALREADY! i kid, i kid. but seriously *note serous face* heehee |
| Jasmine Pulchritude 2006-11-14 ch 1, | abuseI love it. So much depth and emotion behind it. I love how you worded it. Awesome. |