i absolutly love this.(snow)

i absolutely love this. the language is beautiful.

♥

The emotions are powerfull and I really like this poem.

Wolf.

My god, gal, this is fantastic! Wonderfully desrciptive and gorgeously arranged!
"Your irises scream ultramarine/As that wicked smile surfaces"-brilliant and beautiful.

"(You told me naivety was pretty)/I never believed a word you said."-** brilliant, darling! This is mind blowing.

F*cking Awesome.

♥ Alice

ooh. i really like this! the idea behind it is great and a number of the lines in here really pop. i guess fp ruined your format, huh? anyways. 2nd stanza is really great. nice write!