this is really good. i like the way it flows. interesting. keep it up.

hey siobhan,

we used to read each other's poetry all the time...im glad that you are still writing...i really like this poem...as always it spoke to me...you should really read some of my new ones

jessica

Wow, this was very good! I especially loved the lines, 'You say goodbye/To someone who hasn't died' and 'You're scared to laugh loudly/For what if someone hears?' Those were the ones that really stood out to me, and just made the poem that much greater. Great job with this!