This is a good story. You should continue...I like their friendship. Wow it is a crazy world when religion dictates friendship. Sometimes kids know better! Good work!

Love It! its really good...keep writing it i want to read more!

Loving it so far, the kiddies are so sweet. I like the one liners in this (I was more inclined to believe Fyedka than Father Ivan, who couldn’t see very well and always smelled funny) sweet.

One of the best fics I've read in ages.

(Oh, and I'm still looking for you on MySpace - I need a hint!!) LOL.


Kate
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Aww how sweet. I like the way you've captured the child's voice without patronising him. :)

I like this so far--it's really sweet and very believable. I can see an eight-year-old boy telling this story. Keep it up!

:( Poor Russians. You do a good job of capturing their poverty and the situation that leads people to extreme measures like campaigns against Jews and revolutions.

Another great chapter. However, try to include a little description between the dialogue.

Nice! I like it.