 EnemyWithin 2006-11-15 . chapter 1This is actually kind of darkly humorous, I'm not exactly sure how or why, but it made me laugh (not in a bad way or anything). Just the situation has some really dark humor in it, she's planning a wedding with her fiance, who she just killed, and she can't decide whether she still loves him or not, despite the fact that he's beyond caring at this point. And it makes me wonder what happened to her fiance's mistress...the narrator said she's "gone"...hmm. I didn't expect to like this, but I really did, nice job. |