Hey :)

Good story. I liked how it was fluent and mainly dailogue and thus, a lot different from most stories here.

Also, I agree how the concept of 'love' wasn't just the whole three-overused-words deal in your story, because its true...its much more than just a few words. Oh and the part about not liking people some days, very true as well. My best friend gets on my nerves some days, just like certain people get annyoyed by the people closest to them sometimes as well.

Anywho,just thought I'd mentioned that I liked all this stuff...so yeah, sorry for the long ramble.

Cheers!

that was enlightening i have a friend who speaks exactly like that about her boyfriend and i'm the one asking for passion and romance. yeah i geuss love is when you can't convince yourself that u don't love them even though you try to...brilliant peice of dialogue...

This story is unbalanced...Try adding more action to your dialogue. Other than that its ok...