high...low...i guess its all the same in the end...
"but no matter how high you are,
you have to come down
sometime."

Morbid. Unearthy. Beautiful.

first. i don't know why you mixed 'i' and 'I' like that. it kinda distracted me o__o; or was it typo? well yeah. no big deal.
i like this piece. esp the ending. nice impact, adding more emphasis to the whole poem. 'but no matter how high you are,
you have to come down
sometime.' -- it's as if telling me that we have boundaries around us, to remind us that sometimes we have to stop dreaming; we live in reality.
good work. keep writing.

` MCHLV; < 3 felia.

..Wow, this is what I call beautiful poetry. ^^

Your poem is honestly pretty much life. [most of the times at least -_-'] It makes sense and the way you've written the poem- it has 'subtle twist' of where you wish you could fly to 'freedom' and soar through into a carefree world (or something)and then you gradually introduce that life isn't always going to become a happy ending. You've turned a ('simple') concept of what goes up, must come down to a graceful and eloquently expressed poem.
...Or maybe I'm overanalyzing this -_-' but...

Still, brilliant piece ^-^... Bravo! Many applauds. Keep on writing.

oh god this poem hits me so hard... it reminds me of the first time i got .realy. stoned. i was starin up at the clouds and shit, thinking so close to this. and then i started to sober up andi criedicriedicried... thats what this reminds me of. its so strong it kills.

aw *wipes away tears* so sweet and sad. the ending is beatiful, yet *cough* a little clishay. the first verse is ma fave x

I like it! it's so true too. thanks for the review!

reading this makes me feel fre lol. lovely work.