I love the emotion in this, its a quient but sexy love poem.

Juliet.

This has such a lovely human texture to it. The scene created gives the reader such a specific visual. Very well written.

I like this, I could never put into words the intimacies of two lovers with out feeling like I've some how made it fake, I can only manage to do that when writting a story, but in a peom it seems to all come out wrong. Great Job!
write on and please R&R some of my work.
-Raven