|Reviews for in this perfect land|
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 11/17/06 . chapter 1
This has got to be the closest thing I've ever read that I can relate to about "this perfect land". I love the lines written in this, how it was both witty and cleverly placed out. Love this poem, please keep it up.
| hey maria 11/15/06 . chapter 1
"(that i wish i had more black underwear)"
I don't. I wish I had more green underwear. :/
This was a nice poem; I think a lot of people can relate to this, actually, because like you said, no one takes the time to find out about these things. We're all so isolated. I like the simplicity of this piece, and the honesty. Great job.
| dress her up in fairytales 11/15/06 . chapter 1
"that lunch is harder when you’re vegetarian/(that i wish i had more black underwear)"
those lines just made me giggle because it's so true. i'm sometimes left to eat nothing at lunch (but i'm okay with that). ... and would it be weird to say that i only have one pair of black underwear? ha.
"only i know these things./(because no one else takes the time to find out)"
and this, again, is true because people don't seem to care about stuff like that. they just take you, chew you, and spit you back out.