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| summerbee 2006-12-10 ch 1, | abuseyou are one of those amazing people who can take just a few sentences and a tiny collection of words and mold them to make something amazing. something that feels like it has fifty-billion layers, so many you can never totally understand it, and you love it and it's still so prettypretty. *sighs* you're good. you're really good. |
| Idiot Pilot 2006-12-03 ch 1, | abuseI love it. You could probably get a bunch of these published. |
| Aimee Raven 2006-11-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is like a very unique haiku. "pearl and prose" beautiful :)..bittersweet. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abuseIntriguing. |
| TheHangerOfAbhorrantDislike 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abuseI don't know if I quite...understand. If you wouldn't mind explaining this to me I would be grateful. It seems deep and meaningful, but I think I'm missing the point completely. Well, keep writing! -TheHangerOfAbhorrantDislike- |
| Aquafied 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abuseteeter tottery decisions i have such difficulty sometimes saying what i mean |
| wildwolffree17 2006-11-25 ch 1, | abuseOh, I like this. |
| Crossing the Rubicon 2006-11-25 ch 1, | abuseYou've said so much in three lines, and it amazes me. This absolutely amazes me. I also thought this was clever: "her rosary" - "pearl and prose" |
| a lonely september 2006-11-15 ch 1, | abusei love this poem. it says so freakin much in such few lines. i seriously like this poem. if fictionpress hadnt turned ** on me, i would add it to my faves. |
| cocaine and cherries 2006-11-15 ch 1, | abusedid you know that whenever we point a finger at someone, we point three back at ourselves? kind of funny, i think. |