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summerbee
2006-12-10
ch 1,
abuseyou are one of those amazing people who can take just a few sentences and a tiny collection of words and mold them to make something amazing. something that feels like it has fifty-billion layers, so many you can never totally understand it, and you love it and it's still so prettypretty. *sighs* you're good. you're really good.
Idiot Pilot
2006-12-03
ch 1,
abuseI love it. You could probably get a bunch of these published.
Aimee Raven
2006-11-27
ch 1,
abuseThis is like a very unique haiku. "pearl and prose" beautiful :)..bittersweet.
Nobody-n-Particular
2006-11-26
ch 1,
abuseIntriguing.
TheHangerOfAbhorrantDislike
2006-11-26
ch 1,
abuseI don't know if I quite...understand. If you wouldn't mind explaining this to me I would be grateful. It seems deep and meaningful, but I think I'm missing the point completely. Well, keep writing! -TheHangerOfAbhorrantDislike-
Aquafied
2006-11-26
ch 1,
abuseteeter tottery decisions


i have such difficulty sometimes
saying what i mean
wildwolffree17
2006-11-25
ch 1,
abuseOh, I like this.
Crossing the Rubicon
2006-11-25
ch 1,
abuseYou've said so much in three lines, and it amazes me. This absolutely amazes me.

I also thought this was clever: "her rosary" - "pearl and prose"
a lonely september
2006-11-15
ch 1,
abusei love this poem. it says so freakin much in such few lines. i seriously like this poem. if fictionpress hadnt turned ** on me, i would add it to my faves.
cocaine and cherries
2006-11-15
ch 1,
abusedid you know that whenever we point a finger at someone, we point three back at ourselves?

kind of funny, i think.
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