Wha-
Na-
Bu-
Wa-

...YOU CAN'T END IT THERE! O.O

I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! Please, PLEASE update soon! I am LOVING this story! ^^;

~auburn-haired-sadist~

ah! another cliffhanger! why?!?!? XD

where are you?! i'm running out of chapter numbers to submit my reviews!! i miss this story so much! it's been a long while since you've updated it :( i love michael XD

UPDATE! before the little rainbow people that live on the edge of window blinds attack you

Ooh that makes sense! Really loving your story about vampires; doesn't sound like it's based off Twilight at all!! Update soon!!

OOD

Awesome, can't wait for more!

cannot wait to see what u come up w next

very good story. i like the plot twists and how everything is going. my only suggestion would be to expand on Luna's character. i feel like i dont know her that well even after 9 chapters. i hope you stick with this story and see it through!

oh why did he plan to kill her? wat had she'd done. was it bcuz she was with cedric? why not tell her she was a vampire in the beginning anyway? why not kill her now? so many questions but i have to wait till u update so until then my questions will go unanwsered. i hope u update soon

“Luna,” he had trouble putting the words together, “in the beginning… I had planned to -il- you.”

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whoa-wow! nice way to end it! i took some words out so people who prefer reading the reviews won't know what happens in the end of chap 9. my favorite character is michael because he's such a cute little... err... runt in a way ;)

i see myself as brooke, though. she's a very loyal and kind friend with that small spark of happiness when things get sad. i hope that if there is ever a moment, she could just dump adam and take michael because like i said about michael above, i think he's so adorable... a HOT! X) oh yeah!!

thank you so much for the updates!

a bit rushed for chap 8 but i understand that u haven't written in a while. this story reminds me of the twilights series combined with the anita blake series except it's all happening to a regular girl... with semiunusual powers. it's every ladies dream to attract as many hot guys luna does. keep up the good work!

eat her why? anyways update soon.

i can definitely see the Twilight influence on michael.
good job. keep it up!

~alexx

So he planned to kill her then fell in love? Hmm. So does she forgive him or not?

This is a pretty good story overall, the plot's well developed and does sound different to other vamp stories I have read. However, there are typos in your work as well as confusion between you're/your, which you should check, as it can be frustrating for the reader as well as confusing. But keep up the good work.