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| LightfootLee 2007-01-01 ch 1,  | abusehaha, alright that was pretty good. For awhile I thought the story was going on to well, everybodys so nice and helpful, everything works out so well, it wasnt very believeable. But later you said it was a dream so it was ok. good job. I liked it. |