Share/Save/Bookmark
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: Ascending

LightfootLee
2007-01-01
ch 1,
abusehaha, alright that was pretty good. For awhile I thought the story was going on to well, everybodys so nice and helpful, everything works out so well, it wasnt very believeable. But later you said it was a dream so it was ok. good job. I liked it.
Return to Top