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| angel953 2007-01-09 ch 1,  | abuse"You’ve been a few times." i think you mean "You've been here a few times."? "No way have going back," i think you mean "No way of going back, "This is rally happening," typo here i think you mean "This is really happening," Great job on this. Other than the few errors that I pointed out to you, you did great! I absolutely LOVE IT! |
| Black and White Dreams 2006-11-18 ch 1, | abuseWhoa... That was amazing. Powerfull and emotional... Excellant. *~Black and White Dreams~* |