HEY! This is actually me writing myself and everyone to let you all know I'm now under a different name and writing again! So for any new stuff check this profile instead...when I actually get new stuff!

Ha! that was awesome. Just enough description and eye catching imagery (I can totally see Hell spitting out its miscreants). For a prologue it was pretty intriguing. I think for your mature style of writing (what I could see exhibited in this chapter) you're going to find it harder to find readers. I have a feeling your work is thought provoking and while fun, it's something that would appeal to someone who wants to read a novel, not something on here, do you know what I mean? Your writing style, I believe, is something I can definitely bury myself in and I wish you the best of luck. I hope you don't get discouraged by the lack of reviews (it's easy to do) and continue to write. I'll definitely be looking for more of this one.

Can't wait to see more of this story. Check out the Dragon Archers.