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ME! XDXDDD 2006-11-17 . chapter 1
Exceptionally written, AS USUAL! XD
but it's like telling a story, not showing it. i can't feel the pain much.. maybe only 10% of the pain and sorrow and hopelessness?

this poem makes a damn lot of good sense and it has a reason for everything, like why no one's helping the angel, cause "the storm just masks it all."

LOVE IT! XD
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