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Lily 2007-12-04 ch 2, anon.	abuseI hope you'll update this (nearly a year after your last update!) It's fantastic, so deep and descriptive. Keep up with writing. :]
dymonte 2007-09-22 ch 2, anon.	abuseplease update soon!
madapple 2007-08-09 ch 1,	abusei think i just fell a little bit in love with this. i love the detail in your writing. i'll be keeping an eye out for updates, so please do! :)
freakyAngel 2007-07-05 ch 2,	abuseDo I get free ice cream if I reviewed something long? Dots. Okay, yeah. Anyway. This one's so different from TCC, it's not funny. But at the same time both are as cool as they get, and it's not the truth at all if I said I find flaws in the plot or characters or language. Okay, so I don't have aspirations of being 'a well rounded critique' (as written at the bottom of the submit review window). Sue me. I don't care. How are you supposed to be 'well rounded' by criticizing when you know there's nothing to criticize in the first place? Haha. I'm not sure, but I think I'm bootlicking here. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I seem to be going for the free ice cream.
Turtle 2007-05-22 ch 2, anon.	abuseYeah! Good story. Changing writing styles is good every once in a while. I like it alot. Please continue!
Ce'Lyra 2007-04-27 ch 1,	abusethis is a beautiful story.
inkyshower 2007-02-24 ch 2, anon.	abuseI really, really, REALLY love this story.x) True, it's pretty different from TCC but it is in a different league and just as compelling, if not more so. I like Logan's depth, can't wait to see how Talia turns out. So, in short, i really like the way you write, both angst and humor.:) So this is me reviewing...update! ;)
Velvet Curtain 2006-12-27 ch 2,	abuseBeautiful! Very different from Cliche, but absolutely amazing. The characters you write are so beautiful, and I really like the focus you put on families, both on their flaws and their perfections. The same could be said for your characters, though I admit that I'm probably a little more fond of the characters in Cliche. Then again, that could just be because Cliche is longer and I've seen more of them. Oh well. I'll not bore you with my rambling. Can't wait for the next part! love VC
eliza-smiles 2006-12-18 ch 2,	abuse... i like this alot...it is very well written and you show so much empathy through your words...did that make sense? meh any way just wanted to say that i really like what you have created so far and cannot wait until your next update...ciao
milenaa 2006-12-14 ch 2,	abusehey there. took me a while to review this time. a job and being lazy can do that sometimes. i liked this chapter. Logan seems to change with every sentence that is narrated in this story. Talia is still pretty much a mystery, but i like her so far. Bad mental images, i loved that sentence - and I always get them because my best friend and her boyfriend are nearly attached to each other. i don't know why, but for some reason i imagined Talia's sister as the actress Dakota Fanning, I think it was mostly because the name but I guess that the role of a child with cancer would be something she would like to play one day. I'm still trying to find people that would resemble logan and talia, but i haven't had much time yet. any tips? hehe. other than that, I was curious about the Dallacies as well. sounds like a cool name for a band. what kind of band would they be like? The Strokes? The Wallflowers? The Killers? Something totally different? Let me know. I'm glad that there may be mkore than four parts. I think Logan seems like such a complex character. there's so much to be said about him and also about talia, so four chapters would be too little. And I'm all for sticking more of their best friends in here as well, because they seem to be the kind of best friends with whom we could act like the stupidest kid ever and they wouldn't be (so) embarrassed about it. keep writing, it's great so far.
cherie 2006-12-12 ch 2, anon.	abusebeautiful:D hahah and i think Talia's a nice name. and have fun in hongkong(remember to take pic with MICKEY). lol, seeyou um next wed? (:
Lientje46 2006-12-08 ch 2,	abuseHey Louisa! Aw, I so loved this chapter. You're right, this story is so much different than TCC, but I love them both. I like that we got more insight on Logan's family life. His dad's a jerk. The way Logan is feeling sometimes reminds me of myself, although they are both completely different situations. You can really feel Logan's pain and desperation in this story and that's something only good writers can do. You use so much beautiful words and sentences in this story. That's so sad about Dakota. I'm glad Logan decided to draw her. This story really has this kind of mood around it. Whenever I read it I feel sad, but in a nice way. Yeah, I'm completely crazy :) I don't know how to describe the feeling. Oh, and I love the song from Nickelback, I'm listening to it right now. This is an awesome second chapter, I can't wait to read the next one! Okay, I'm going to email you now :) X Lien
Nocturnal silhouette 2006-12-08 ch 2,	abuseOnce again, beautiful. This is more about a guy and a girl meeting, having randomly hot sex, and suddenly being in love. This is about getting to know one another and a deeper connection. And I really like that. Oh and you have great taste. Wentworth Miller is gorgeous. haha the Prison Break reference in your author's note...
Nickellye 2006-12-07 ch 2,	abusethis really is an amazingly well written story.there is so much detail about Logan's surrounding that it makes you feel like you are there.though i have to ask, in part one were they at a carnival or something? and i dot ge the 7-sprite thing. i cant wait to read the rest. ~Nickel
manderschica13 2006-12-07 ch 2,	abuseAs much as I love this story, YOU SO GAVE A HUGE CLIFFIE ON "They Call it a Cliche" YOU NEED TO UPDATE THAT ONE PRONTO!!

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